
लम्बी सी सड़क के किनारे मेरा एक छोटा सा घर है,
लौटना है अपनी ही आदतों से, बहुत दूर का सफ़र है
जहां ये टूटता है मन मेरा, बातों में घुला कुछ ज़हर है,
आंगन में लगे एक तरु की छाया से थोड़ी शीत लहर है,
भीतर तो जलती हूं पर देख जग को थोड़ा ठहर है,
हर किसी की सोच का हर किसी पर आता कहर है,
जीवन का सुखद पड़ाव भीड़ की बस्ती में मेरा घर है
लम्बी सी सड़क के किनारे मेरा एक छोटा सा घर है
-डॉ अवंतिका
Very nice and true feelings ☺️.. great effort Avantika 👍
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Heart touching poem….nycc dr avantika👌👌👌👌👌
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Well done Dr. Avantika… Keep it up.. 😊
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Thank you
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Best poem by best poet (my dear friend Avantika shekhawat) 😘👌👌👌😘
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Nice Dee 👌👌👌👌
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Nice Creativity for the words Avantika
Many many congrats
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शानदार जोरदार बेमिसाल
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Awesome feelings
👌👌👌😊
Dr. Avantika 😆
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छोटा सा घर 🏡😊
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The depth of talent in this comment stream is breath taking, keep it up such a great creativity…. 😍
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NICE THOUGHT
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Great efforts sis… Keep it up… Ol d best
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Shaandar.avantika👌👌….well done👍😊
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Well done avantika
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Nice n great effort as usual 😊😊
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great one dear….. ये तो कुछ पंक्तियों से शुरूआत की है,,,, कविताएँ तो अभी लिखना भी और पढना भी… बाकी है……. keep it up…… 👍
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Very nice dear i hope everyone like ur poem and ur feeling
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Very nice Avantika
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Nice thoughts compiled in an innovative manner to create
A live pic in the mind of many……….. Great words selected for the progression to modulate integration of unspoken thoughts in an attractive manner……. As poetry is the art of making a bridal makeup……. As it depends
Upon the beautician how she decorates a living body……
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Very nice heart touching
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Nyc boss👍👍👍
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जो लौटकर जिदंगी कुछ करने को कहेगी,
कलम मेरी शब्दों की आहट से बहेगी,
ये जो हम सबका हिन्दुस्तान है ना तब और महकेगा,
तेरी मेरी सबकी जुबां हिन्दी कहेगी।।
Thanks to all of u
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Really great👌… Superb….Great job avantika
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Awesome poem .. Well done Avntika
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I’m using Google Translate to read you poems. I hope it is doing them justice. As i far as I can tell they are beautiful words. Thank you.
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I will soon translate them for you. Sorry for the trouble.
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No, it’s not trouble. I enjoy reading the translation and I like seeing the Hindi script. It looks so beautiful. I just hope that the translations are doing justice to your words.
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Great poem avantika Sach a home is single place where human find relax and happiness
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आज भारत के ग्रामीण क्षेत्र के लगभग बीस फ़ीसदी लोंगों को अपना घर खोने का डर है,लगता है मानों जैसे तुमने उनके जज्बात छाप दिए हों ।।।।।। बहुत दिलचस्प, अति सुंदर कविता,मुजे बहूत पसंद आई।
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Bahot hi khubsurat likha,likhti rehiye
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बहुत सुंदर
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